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I've been creative writing all my life, though with various haitus(es) along the way. IFrom 2010 I started this blog and enjoyed sharing writing and other information with everyone. illness and bereavement supplied the more recent hiatus.

Wednesday, 9 November 2011

Fleeting Haiku

Jenn has set us a Fleeting haiku challenge this week!

Traditional 5,7,5 syllable structure applied





 
Precious memories
Blotted out by Alzheimer’s
Now lost forever


17 comments:

  1. Excellent haiku. The last was poignant.

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  2. Oh lovely lovely haikus! thank you! Take care
    x

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  3. Wow. They're all good, but the last is really powerful.

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  4. I like the bubble one! Wonderful haikus.

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  5. A very clever set of haikus. I particularly like the last one.
    Jamie

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  6. Lovely take on the prompt word!! Great fleeting moments!! Gone in a mouthful and gone with a pop are enjoyable!!

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  7. love those pictures recording the moments most of us miss! and fleeting memory makes me write everything down =)

    nice job!

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  8. Great haiku Madeleine! The pics are icing on the cake, great shots!

    Hank

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  9. Madelaine...
    All of them Perfect!

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  10. The last one is so sad. :( But I love the bubble! :)

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  11. I love your set of haiku...the one on Alzheimer's I thoroughly understand...my mother had Alzheimer's

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  12. Love the soapy bubble. Thanks for visiting my blog.

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  13. The last one brought a lump to my throat.

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  14. Lovely set of life's fleeting moments! Very nice!

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