Jenn has set us a Fleeting haiku challenge this week!
Traditional 5,7,5 syllable structure applied
Precious memories
Blotted out by Alzheimer’s
Now lost forever
The ramblings of aspiring author, Madeleine Sara, her dreams to become published and her trials and tribulations along the way. Plus other writerly nuggets of wisdom! Apologies for my typos, I get very cold hands with Raynauds and sometimes there's a persistent kittie on my lap, nudging my hand as I type.
About Me
- scribbleandedit.blogspot.co.uk
- United Kingdom
- I've been creative writing all my life, though with various haitus(es) along the way. IFrom 2010 I started this blog and enjoyed sharing writing and other information with everyone. illness and bereavement supplied the more recent hiatus.
Excellent haiku. The last was poignant.
ReplyDeleteWonderful set of haiku:)
ReplyDeleteOh lovely lovely haikus! thank you! Take care
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Wow. They're all good, but the last is really powerful.
ReplyDeleteI like the bubble one! Wonderful haikus.
ReplyDeleteA very clever set of haikus. I particularly like the last one.
ReplyDeleteJamie
Lovely take on the prompt word!! Great fleeting moments!! Gone in a mouthful and gone with a pop are enjoyable!!
ReplyDeletelove those pictures recording the moments most of us miss! and fleeting memory makes me write everything down =)
ReplyDeletenice job!
Great haiku Madeleine! The pics are icing on the cake, great shots!
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Madelaine...
ReplyDeleteAll of them Perfect!
You've caught many fleeting scenes!
ReplyDeleteFleeting Soul Food
The last one is so sad. :( But I love the bubble! :)
ReplyDeleteI love your set of haiku...the one on Alzheimer's I thoroughly understand...my mother had Alzheimer's
ReplyDeleteLove the soapy bubble. Thanks for visiting my blog.
ReplyDeleteThe last one brought a lump to my throat.
ReplyDeleteThe bubble one is my fave :)
ReplyDeleteLovely set of life's fleeting moments! Very nice!
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