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I've been creative writing all my life, though with various haitus(es) along the way. IFrom 2010 I started this blog and enjoyed sharing writing and other information with everyone. illness and bereavement supplied the more recent hiatus.

Wednesday, 3 August 2011

Distance Haiku

This week's theme: Distance

Check out www.youknowthatblog.com for other entries.


Pisces swims up stream

Thursday's child has far to go
It's going to take time
Long distance swimming

Seemingly never ending  

He must stay the course




I must be with you
It's just a train ride away
No distance really
Posted by scribbleandedit.blogspot.co.uk at 06:00

14 comments:

  1. Lynda R Young as Elle Cardy3 August 2011 at 06:33

    That swimming photo is freaky lol.
    Love Haiku and yours are amazing.

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  2. Hilary Melton-Butcher3 August 2011 at 07:51

    Hi Madeleine .. love these Haikus .. and the matching pictures .. they're just great - fun! Cheers Hilary

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  3. Sarah Tokeley3 August 2011 at 11:08

    I love all these, but I think the first one is my favourite. That swimming picture is amazing :)

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  4. kaykuala3 August 2011 at 12:15

    Hi Madeleine,
    Haikus can be mesmerizing. Will make it a regular.

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  5. Old Kitty3 August 2011 at 12:33

    Awwwwww!! I do like the third haiku - speaks to the romantic in me! Yay! Take care
    x

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  6. Mary@GigglesandGuns3 August 2011 at 14:51

    Sorry I haven't been by lately. I see I've missed quite a bit.
    Loved the Haiku as always but admit the swimmer was a tad creepy.

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  7. Kelley3 August 2011 at 15:58

    Love the swimming in the road pic.

    From your newest follower :)

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  8. Ria4 August 2011 at 01:07

    LOVE, Love, love the tie in to the pictures!

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  9. Becca4 August 2011 at 02:53

    Wow your 2nd haiku/picture are awesome! :)

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  10. Jenn @ Youknow...that Blog?4 August 2011 at 03:14

    Wow, great picture of the swimmer - freaky! Love your haiku - well done!

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  11. Anonymous4 August 2011 at 06:16

    great set with amazing photos to match ... well done ... :-)

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  12. Magical Mystical Teacher5 August 2011 at 02:14

    Only a train ride? Only a plane flight? Whatever separates us is no distance at all, if we love who's on the other end!

    Distant Clouds

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  13. Suze5 August 2011 at 04:53

    Maddie, I love these. I am both a Pisces and Thursday's child. Also, I am enamored of trains.

    Just love these.

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  14. Madeleine Begun Kane7 August 2011 at 05:42

    Excellent haiku!

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