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I've been creative writing all my life, though with various haitus(es) along the way. IFrom 2010 I started this blog and enjoyed sharing writing and other information with everyone. illness and bereavement supplied the more recent hiatus.

Wednesday, 27 July 2011

Frustration as Haiku


Own a computer?
Frustration personified
Well, need I say more?

Hosted by Jenn

Dialing a number
Make your choice from the options
Now you're put on hold!
Visiting the zoo
It's the holiday season
Being watched all day
Posted by scribbleandedit.blogspot.co.uk at 07:00

17 comments:

  1. Sarah Tokeley27 July 2011 at 10:29

    Number two, one of my major pet hates!

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  2. Ellie Garratt27 July 2011 at 10:32

    I'm with Sarah, number is a major annoyance for me!

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  3. Gemma Wiseman27 July 2011 at 11:47

    Add me to the list of favouring number 2 as a pet hate! That seems to be a weekly occurrence! Almost part of routine! And I adore the zoo observation!

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  4. Anonymous27 July 2011 at 14:24

    Both #1 and #2 fit into my daily pet peeves. These were great :)

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  5. Anonymous27 July 2011 at 15:42

    So true .... you always seem to give your Haiku a great spin these are darling!

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  6. Talli Roland27 July 2011 at 17:02

    Love the first one! I can just sense the frustration...

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  7. Misha Gerrick27 July 2011 at 20:56

    Ooh... 1 and 2 suck. Big time. >_<

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  8. Anonymous28 July 2011 at 00:08

    1 and 2 are definitely on my frustration list ... :-)

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  9. Maeve Frazier28 July 2011 at 00:16

    Number 3 looks like the little girl I saw at the store today. Her mother's solution was to sit on the floor of the store and do the same back to her daughter (I am assuming they were mother and daughter :)) Glad I was only a spectator! Love the post!

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  10. Aeria28 July 2011 at 02:14

    Yup, I think you have nailed frustration perfectly!
    Wonderfully done!

    aeria

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  11. Maria Zannini28 July 2011 at 02:31

    Oh, boy. The computer one nailed it.

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  12. Anonymous28 July 2011 at 02:46

    Great haiku. The second one is the most frustrating for me.

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  13. Madeleine Begun Kane28 July 2011 at 07:26

    What charming haiku!

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  14. Anonymous28 July 2011 at 12:25

    good ones Madeleine. I like the first one the best :)

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  15. Langley Cornwell28 July 2011 at 13:32

    I love these. The haiku about the zoo goes perfectly with the pic!

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  16. Jenn @ Youknow...that Blog?28 July 2011 at 18:16

    Ha, love the Orangutan's point of view - they must get sick of having people peer at them all day. Well done on all :)

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  17. Suze29 July 2011 at 04:08

    Hello, my dear Maddie!

    I usually have a preferred verse but can't choose this time. :)

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