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I've been creative writing all my life, though with various haitus(es) along the way. IFrom 2010 I started this blog and enjoyed sharing writing and other information with everyone. illness and bereavement supplied the more recent hiatus.

Monday 21 February 2011

Micro Monday Birthday!

Susan from Stony River sets a weekly
Challenge Picture each Monday,
where a picture paints 140 characters, or even fewer


A cold chill blew along the empty hospital corridors. Nurse Eva's heart sank. Blast! The job offer had been nothing more than a hoax. (137 characters with spaces)


Hey, it's my birthday today!
Posted by scribbleandedit.blogspot.co.uk at 07:00

37 comments:

  1. eyeography21 February 2011 at 07:31

    Sad for nurse Eva...
    But I like your work... :)

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  2. Dominic de Mattos21 February 2011 at 08:42

    HAPPY BIRTHDAY MADELEINE!!

    Hope you have a great day.

    Better than poor nurse Eva for sure!

    :Dom

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  3. Gemma Wiseman21 February 2011 at 08:57

    An interesting twist on this empty corridor!

    And hope your special day is a great one!

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  4. Old Kitty21 February 2011 at 09:59

    Happy happy happy Birthday Madeleine!!!!!!! May your special day be full of pressies and treats!! Yay!!!!!

    Poor Nurse Eva!! How cruel!!! Awww! Take care
    x

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  5. Lisa Ricard Claro21 February 2011 at 10:27

    Happy birthday! :)

    Poor Eva! In this terrible economic downturn she is not alone in her troubles. Great microfiction.

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  6. Louise 21 February 2011 at 10:48

    Happy birthday :)

    Although I'm sure with hindsight, Eva wouldn't have wanted to work in such a miserable looking place.

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  7. Cally Jackson21 February 2011 at 11:06

    Happy birthday! Hope you've had a great day and that things improve for poor Nurse Eva!

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  8. Jim21 February 2011 at 11:40

    Happy Birthday, Madeleine!
    Happy Birthday, Madeleine!
    Happy Birthday, Madeleine!
    Happy Birthday, Madeleine!
    Happy Birthday, Madeleine!
    Happy Birthday, Madeleine!
    Happy Birthday, Madeleine!
    Happy Birthday, Madeleine!
    Happy Birthday, to YOU!

    Pour soul, that must be sooooooo disheartening especially in these hard times.
    ..

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  9. Margo Benson21 February 2011 at 13:09

    Oh poor nurse Eva!

    Wishing you a VERY Happy Birthday full of happiness and fun! x

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  10. Lindsay N. Currie21 February 2011 at 13:38

    Happy Birthday!!!!!!!!

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  11. Maria Zannini21 February 2011 at 15:23

    Happy birthday, Madeleine! Party, hearty.

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  12. Abby Minard21 February 2011 at 15:25

    Happy Birthday Madeleine! Hope you have a good day- loved your micro sentence!

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  13. Liz P21 February 2011 at 15:34

    Ooo creepy picture...

    Happy Birthday!! And many more!

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  14. Colene Murphy21 February 2011 at 15:37

    Awe no! Great sentence!

    HAPPY BIRTHDAY MADELEINE!!!

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  15. Ashling21 February 2011 at 15:43

    Bummer on the job, but I think Eva can do better. And have a most delightful, wonder-filled birthday!

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  16. Anonymous21 February 2011 at 15:43

    ¡Feliz cumpleaños!

    I seriously need to know what happens next with Nurse Eva. Who's waiting there for her? So creepy...

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  17. anthonynorth21 February 2011 at 15:46

    Great ending. Enjoyed that.

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  18. Creatively Sensitive21 February 2011 at 16:16

    Happy Birthday! Love the new blog design, and your clever word crafting as always :)

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  19. Peggy21 February 2011 at 16:20

    Happy Birthday and many more!
    Mine was last week!
    Feb. b-days are cool.

    Poor Nurse Eva, maybe she'll get the next job!
    Nice one.

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  20. Ellie Garratt21 February 2011 at 16:34

    Happy Birthday to you!
    Happy Birthday to you!
    Happy Birthday dear Madeleine!
    Happy Birthay to you!

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  21. Talli Roland21 February 2011 at 17:27

    Happy happy birthday, Madeleine! Hope you have a fantastic day!

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  22. Doctor FTSE21 February 2011 at 17:47

    Many Happy Returns.
    Many Happy MFMs!

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  23. Debora21 February 2011 at 18:23

    I think she'd better turn and run from that building...why did they lure her there with a false advertisement?

    Happy Birthday!!!

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  24. Ann21 February 2011 at 18:25

    Hap, Hap Happy Birthday Madeleine! May all your dreams come true....unlike poor nurse Eva.

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  25. Sylvia K21 February 2011 at 18:39

    Happy, Happy Birthday, Madeline!! Great take on the pic of the day and I do wish better for your dreams than Eva's, too!! Have a great week!

    Sylvia

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  26. Susan Fobes22 February 2011 at 02:08

    I believe I would run, not walk, to the nearest exit! LOL!

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  27. Trisha22 February 2011 at 02:10

    Happy b'day!! Hope it was a great day :)

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  28. jen22 February 2011 at 03:03

    Nice work!
    and happy birthday!
    swinging by from the blogfest, and following to make sure I don't miss any of the good stuff.
    The Survival Mama

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  29. Susan Fobes22 February 2011 at 03:12

    Oh, and happy birthday!

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  30. Hilary Melton-Butcher22 February 2011 at 10:36

    Hi Madeleine .. love that story - so clever.

    But more importantly Happy Birthday for yesterday .. hope you had a great weekend and a good Monday .. the day .. and a very happy year ahead ..

    Cheers from a gloomy Eastbourne & no doubt it's not much better down your way! Hilary

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  31. Carol Kilgore22 February 2011 at 14:22

    That photo gives me the creeps.

    Hope you had the best birthday ever!

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  32. Anonymous22 February 2011 at 14:56

    Very nice story :)

    And Happy Birthday, Crusader Groupie! :D I hope it was awesome.

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  33. Carol Riggs22 February 2011 at 21:31

    Happy, happy birthday!!! Hope you have a fantastic day. :)

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  34. MTeacress22 February 2011 at 22:43

    Happy, happy birthday Madeleine dear. Happy days will come to you all year. If I had a wish, then it would beeeee, a happy, happy birthdaaaaaay, to you from me. :)

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  35. Susan Fields23 February 2011 at 00:36

    Happy birthday - I hope it's great!

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  36. scribbleandedit.blogspot.co.uk23 February 2011 at 07:50

    Bless you everyone. Thank you. I had a party at my knitting group which was fun! :O)

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  37. Anonymous24 February 2011 at 00:19

    That should teach her to answer an online ad! Good one for this week's picture. Cheers~

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