This week's theme: Transition
From child to adult
Desperate for validation
A steep learning curve
A change of gender
It's potentially painful
For mind and body
Transforming seasons
Autumn, winter, spring, summer
Transitions of life
Transitional words
Provide continuity
For budding writers
Lovely lines. They made me smile, thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteA very clever, creative collection of haikus! Each one shines with unique character!
ReplyDeleteEach one captures the theme so beautifully, they're lovely.
ReplyDeleteOh wow - these are all perfect!!! Wonderful and lyrical - especially the seasonal one!! Thank you! Take care
ReplyDeletex
very interesting haikus, each had its own taste. thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteTrisha
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Mine:
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Great work.. :)
ReplyDelete"change of gender"..:D
Great Transitions expressed in the collection of Haiku's. The child to adulthood is a good example of the learning curve and conversion into a better state.
ReplyDeleteInteresting subject matter. I always marvel at those who can create a haiku that makes sense.
ReplyDeleteLee
Tossing It Out
Wow, you did a great job. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteI love the seasonal transition one! Ah, haikus. I haven't written one in years, but how fun! Thanks for sharing ~ :)
ReplyDeleteWow, broad use of theme this week! Nicely done :)
ReplyDeleteyou explored so many transitions with grace and eloquence great writing!
ReplyDeleteHmm, the "desperate for validation" definitely made me think. As a preschool teacher, I see this all the time (kids from teachers, kids from kids, etc.), but it really is equally important to adults, isn't it? Thanks for that.
ReplyDelete(hope to see your "mug" during our blogfest tomorrow!)
erica
So many transitions captured in beautiful words. The third one is my favorite. Have a wonderful week :)
ReplyDeleteindeed, transitions spell changes in our lives. lovely haiku pieces here. :)
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