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I've been creative writing all my life, though with various haitus(es) along the way. IFrom 2010 I started this blog and enjoyed sharing writing and other information with everyone. illness and bereavement supplied the more recent hiatus.

Monday 3 January 2011

Pulses will Race! The No Kiss Blogfest




The No Kiss Blogfest! hosted by Frankie Writes
This is when you get to write a scene or post one from your favourite books, movies, and TV shows that show the almost kiss: the rising, crushing, excruciating, longing, tension that comes from when two characters get oh-so-close to kissing that you can just feel it....and then...they don't!


~ MY ENTRY ~
The idea came from a M&B MS that I wrote in 1996. I have since rewritten it for this piece.


Posted by scribbleandedit.blogspot.co.uk at 14:25

14 comments:

  1. Dominic de Mattos3 January 2011 at 15:22

    Should be an interesting term!

    I loved the line "Hoping her cheeks hadn't flushed as crimson as her thoughts had been." Great stuff Madeleine.

    Congrats on your 200 followers!

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  2. Ellie Garratt3 January 2011 at 16:25

    200 followers? Yay for you! That is awesome, and it demonstrates what a warm and wonderful person you are.

    Ooo . . .the almost kiss. You can feel the sexual tension fizzing through the whole scene. Loved it!

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  3. scribbleandedit.blogspot.co.uk3 January 2011 at 16:31

    Thank you Dom, yes it will be an interesting term for them unless Plasticene Pete strikes again :O)
    Bless you Ellie, thanks for your sweet comments. Glad your pulses raced and fizzed ;O)

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  4. Michael Di Gesu3 January 2011 at 16:42

    Yah, Madeleine! First for a fantastic story and second for your 200th follower!

    I loved the light and breezy way you wrote this entry: natural, believable.

    Great job!

    I'm looking forward to a new year's worth of great writing from you ...

    Michael

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  5. XmasDolly3 January 2011 at 17:02

    Whoa! Saved by the bell! Such a romantical type moment. Gonna have to find me a few of those. lol Have a great day

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  6. Colette S3 January 2011 at 17:59

    Muscles of her mouth..er body.

    I like.

    Very good depictions!

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  7. Christine Danek3 January 2011 at 18:33

    Great descriptions. Love this. Great job!

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  8. Colene Murphy3 January 2011 at 18:37

    Oooooh!!! Tease much!! Nom...Nice entry!!

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  9. Unknown3 January 2011 at 20:56

    Congrats on 200 followers!!!

    What an awesome piece!!!

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  10. Old Kitty3 January 2011 at 21:27

    I like Pete bumbling in with his ill timed glasses of ice cubes!!

    Great and fun build up to the non-kiss!! Lovely, take care
    x

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  11. The Words Crafter4 January 2011 at 00:23

    OOOoooohhhh, this was GOOD!!! Is it me, or is it hot in here? Whew!

    I agree with Dominic...it should be a very interesting term....

    Yay for 200+ followers!!!!

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  12. Unknown4 January 2011 at 01:22

    Oh man, I love the way you described Pete. Haha. Loved it.

    Thanks for sharing this. Lovely job. And I see that you've reached 200 followers! Jealous! And now you have 201. :)

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  13. scribbleandedit.blogspot.co.uk4 January 2011 at 17:34

    LOL! Yes I am glad some of you felt for poor Plasticene Pete, too.
    Glad it got your pulses racing. I enjoyed adding the humour, too. I always wonder at romance scripts where the man and woman only argue and then become passionate, you wonder how they ever get it together if they hate each other so much. ;O)

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  14. Frankie Diane Mallis6 January 2011 at 14:01

    Oooh this was a great piece! Thanks so much for sharing and posting in the fest!

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