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I've been creative writing all my life, though with various haitus(es) along the way. IFrom 2010 I started this blog and enjoyed sharing writing and other information with everyone. illness and bereavement supplied the more recent hiatus.

Thursday, 6 January 2011

New Creation Blogfest

                                 Summer Ross' NEW CREATION BLOGFEST

Rules : Choose one sentence from your favourite last line from a story you wrote last year and one brand new sentence to start something new.

'Only the pale skin of her face might give her away'.

(Taken from a YA novel I began last year)


'Janise felt every bit the tortoise trying to walk upright with its shell strapped to its back'.

(Taken from a short story I'm gonna finish writing sometime this month or maybe next)



Belated Happy Birthday Wishes to Summer
Posted by scribbleandedit.blogspot.co.uk at 07:02

10 comments:

  1. Old Kitty6 January 2011 at 11:14

    Yay!!

    Great sentences - the first one feels sad because your mc is all pale and trying not to be!

    The second one has a great imagery - poor burdened Janise!!! Lovely! Take care
    x

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  2. Elena Solodow6 January 2011 at 14:08

    First sentence. Vampire? I'm wondering...

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  3. Angela6 January 2011 at 15:18

    Clever idea.

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  4. Danette6 January 2011 at 15:30

    Stopping by for the blogfest! Your opening sentence could be a marvelous metaphor (which is what I am hoping!!!!)

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  5. Summer Ross6 January 2011 at 17:22

    Thank you so much for the birthday wishes and participating. I love your lines. the new one gives so much potential. happy writing.

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  6. Margo Kelly6 January 2011 at 19:55

    Hmm! I'm curious. I want to know why the character is burdened! :)

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  7. Golden Eagle6 January 2011 at 22:09

    The first sentence makes me wonder why she's pale--the second intrigues me because the character's obviously carrying something around!

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  8. scribbleandedit.blogspot.co.uk7 January 2011 at 09:34

    It's interesting how sentences out of context can completely mislead the reader.

    Well no in the first she's not a vampire. She's hiding from someone.

    Yes Janise is carrying something around physically as well as possibly metaphorically.
    Glad you enjoyed my snippets :O)

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  9. Dominic de Mattos8 January 2011 at 17:56

    Made me think of poor old Christian in The Pilgrim's Progress! An intriguing start. :)

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  10. Anonymous8 January 2011 at 20:23

    Interesting. I'm wondering who 'she's trying to fit in among without being given away, in the ending - and it doesn't sound like an definitive end while there's still uncertainty there. But lots of stories still have uncertainties, I guess. I know that mine do. (That's why there's sequels.)

    And the beginning is just a great sentence. I'm not sure what's making Janise feel that way, but I love the mental picture from the simile! (The tortoise is a bit cartoon-like, in my head.)

    Thanks for taking part in this blogfest. I signed up late, but I'd love to know what you think of my sentences!

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