THEME: Reflections, Interpretations and Musings
I chose to reflect on dysfunctional relationships
Apologies, it's not festive or warm and fuzzy,
I'm afraid, but I hope it packs a punch!
Apologies, it's not festive or warm and fuzzy,
I'm afraid, but I hope it packs a punch!
ouch yes- but a very well written OUCH! Bravissimo!
ReplyDeleteWell-written poem!
ReplyDeletelovely- mines here- http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/01/23/painted-hallways/
ReplyDeletesuper fine tuned flow...
ReplyDeleteGlad to see you share and contribute.
Happy Holidays!
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Not a festive poem but a good one. I have an award waiting for you on my blog. Happy Christmas! Catherine
ReplyDeleteGreat poem! I don't always 'get' poems, I'm embarrassed to say, but I 'get' this one!
ReplyDeleteOw!! Methinks it's time for couples' therapy!!
ReplyDeleteFabulous caustic and passionate poem of love gone very very wrong! Thank you! take care
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As always, I really enjoy your poems, Madeleine.
ReplyDeleteAnd thank you again for the award.
HAPPY CHRISTMAS!
Michael
Thank you everyone.
ReplyDeleteI took the idea from a book by Phil McGraw called 'Relationship Rescue' that applies to all sorts of relationships, not just the married kind. I represents a love gone wrong between other relatives. ;O)
You are welcome Michael.
ReplyDeleteI am glad you got my poem Cinette.
I try to make my poems down to earth rather than romantic and obscure though sometimes I get carried away.
I guess the theme could be seen to be appropriate for this time of year, considering certain statistics at Christmas. ;O)
"In the no-win illusion / Of your bottomless pit." Love it!
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ouch! this hurts... and you expressed it so easily. mines here- http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/01/23/painted-hallways/
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