

HAIKU THEME: INHIBITIONS
Maybe next summer Oh to feel his kiss
I don't think I'm good enough Our eyes meet across the lawn
I don't think I'm good enough Our eyes meet across the lawn
I just can't do it. Yet I look away.
Ode to Self Derision
by Madeleine Maddocks
I wouldn't read this,
If I were you.
It's rubbish,
I wrote it;
I know it's true.
Great poems, I've always been fond of Haikus, though haven't really tried to write many. Love your ode to self-derision :)
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the 1st haiku struck a chord in me, cause am full of excuses.
ReplyDeleteThat said, thank you for the blog tutorial,I did one tab on Monday and I'm so proud of myself
Eyes that never meet,
ReplyDeleteFingers, lips that never touch:
My inhibitions.
Check out my entry today for more of the same, in sonnet form.
http://jazzbumpa.blogspot.com/2010/11/haiku-wednesday-inhibition.html
Cheers!
JzB
I love the haikus!
ReplyDeleteI've never really tried writing haikus before, but they can be a good way of expressing yourself.
Love them all - well done!
ReplyDeleteLoving your poetry.
ReplyDeleteWow, this poetry is amazing!! I have so much trouble finding people who appreciate poetry. Keep up the great work! Nice blog :)
ReplyDeleteYour poem is beautiful and it is also educational.I appreciate the haikus too, short and sweet! Great!
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed your poetry. Loved the take on inhibitions.
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