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I've been creative writing all my life, though with various haitus(es) along the way. IFrom 2010 I started this blog and enjoyed sharing writing and other information with everyone. illness and bereavement supplied the more recent hiatus.

Monday, 20 September 2010

Micro Fiction Monday#4

Susan from Stony River, set us another great
picture for this Monday's Microfiction Challenge
"Where a picture paints 140 characters, or even fewer."
This is only my 4th of 49
Lifted by love, as the sun shone over the farm, Alma and George floated off together to make hay. (96 characters with spaces)


HAIKU
Footloose and fancy
Hand in hand, deeply in love
Gliding together


BTW Don't forget to check out my creative blogger nomination and word search grid in yesterday's post ;O)
Posted by scribbleandedit.blogspot.co.uk at 09:06

17 comments:

  1. Deborah20 September 2010 at 10:12

    Lovely ... both of them!

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  2. Ellie Garratt20 September 2010 at 10:43

    'to make hay'! I loved your story. Brilliantly told!

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  3. David20 September 2010 at 12:24

    Gliding together. I think you painted the picture perfectly.

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  4. joanne fox20 September 2010 at 12:53

    Those are lovely, though I especially like the story! And such a nice picture too.

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  5. Bill ~ {The Old Fart}20 September 2010 at 13:33

    It's been years since I heard the phrase "Making Hay". Nicely done Madeleine

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  6. Anonymous20 September 2010 at 15:00

    Lovely words to go with the picture. And well done on receiving the Creative Blogger award!

    CJ xx

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  7. Priyanka Bhowmick20 September 2010 at 15:15

    wonderful reflections!

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  8. scribbleandedit.blogspot.co.uk20 September 2010 at 16:29

    Thank you CJ, Priyanka, Bill Joanne, David, Ellie & Deborah. It is a lovely picture to write about. I have a wicked friday flashfiction in store, too. ;O)

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  9. Alex J. Cavanaugh20 September 2010 at 18:06

    Looking forward to your Top 10 TV Shows today!

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  10. Anonymous20 September 2010 at 18:51

    I really like the story--'make hay while the sun shines', my father used to say. But I think he was really talking about hay at the time, as we lived on a farm! Not so sure about the couple in the picture...
    Have a great week. Cheers!

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  11. Pat20 September 2010 at 19:02

    Beautifully poetic, both the story and the Haiku. I like your alliteration in both. Well done!

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  12. scribbleandedit.blogspot.co.uk20 September 2010 at 19:57

    Thank you Pat, Sylvia (blushing now!);O)

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  13. Diane20 September 2010 at 20:49

    Whoopie!!! :O)

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  14. septembermom21 September 2010 at 01:02

    Love "to make hay." Both are great :)

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  15. Ann21 September 2010 at 17:31

    Lovely!Both of them.

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  16. Susan at Stony River24 September 2010 at 00:17

    Are they really going to make hay, or are they going to (wink wink) "make hay"?

    The haiku is so nice!

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  17. scribbleandedit.blogspot.co.uk24 September 2010 at 09:24

    Definitely the wink wink sort! Glad yoy enjoyed it. :O)

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