You're not floundering at all!!I love the bird haiku and the photo to go, that's quite some hairstyle!Have a lovely day,Jade
Lovely haiku, Madeleine. The bird piccie really makes me smile!Hope the antibios kick in asap, wishing you better.
I wish that I could write lovely haiku when I was sick! :-) Hope you feel better soon.
I'm still in recovery myself--but at least I didn't have to endure medical students.Hope you get well soon.
I think freestyle is the way to go with poetry. Of course,I'm biased. I love stream of consciousness stuff.
the first one was super cute, that pic is too much. :)the remaining two are fabulous as always. three splendid haikus in a bunch.trishahttp://mydomainpvt.wordpress.com/2011/02/14/free-soul-14th-feb-2011/
Flounder is a fishWith flailing tail, shiny scale:Swim away, my friend!Cheers!JzB
you're totally not floundering you're swimming with the big fish! LOL
Great haikus on freestyle - especially the wonderful birdie one!! LOL!!!And none of this floundering - your haikus are spirited and fun!Please take care and rest and get better Madeleine!! x
Great haikus! I hope you feel better soon.
The first pic of the bird-hair-style made me smile!! Lovely Haikus too!!
Love the haiku. Feel better!
Hi MadeleineI do hope the antibiotics knock this thing on the head. it's no fun having the vavavoom knocked out of you!Your Haiku made me smile - and I know what you mean about it being so much more difficult when you don't have a focus!I slipped in one with the subject of freestyle. :):Dom
Love your haiku.I'm a fellow crusader and follower. :)
How sweet of you to write a Haiku about my morning hairdo. lolTake care and feel better soon.
My oldest had to do a big poetry assignment for school. I'll have to ask her if Haiku was a part of it.I like the changes you've made on your blog, and is that a pic of you I see in the upper right? Or has it been there all this time and I'm just catching on? Feel better soon. :)
Great verse. Loved them all. Hope you're feeling better.Greetings from a fellow Crusader. Dan
Good ones! Love the bird's 'do. Hope you feel better quickly!
LOL! Bless you allI wouldn't count them as my best haiku, but they are such fun to write even when you're feeling ill, though a proper poem needs all my brain power, so I've not written one of those for a while.What a great haiku Jazzbumpa. :O)
Love the haikus! Hope you're feeling better. Your advice from the workshop transcends all genres, I have some great little stories from overused subjects. I'd like to think I could publish those after a more original one, once my name is out there. I'd hate to waste a great story just because the subject has been done to death.
I always enjoy your haiku, Madeleine. Thanks for sharing with us.
That is the funniest bird!
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