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Wednesday, 24 November 2010

Inhibitions




One Shot Wednesday


HAIKU THEME: INHIBITIONS

Maybe next summer                                                   Oh to feel his kiss
I don't think I'm good enough                                      Our eyes meet across the lawn
I just can't do it.                                                          Yet I look away.



 
Ode to Self Derision
by Madeleine Maddocks

I wouldn't read this,
If I were you.
It's rubbish,
I wrote it;
I know it's true.       



9 comments:

  1. Great poems, I've always been fond of Haikus, though haven't really tried to write many. Love your ode to self-derision :)

    Rach

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  2. the 1st haiku struck a chord in me, cause am full of excuses.
    That said, thank you for the blog tutorial,I did one tab on Monday and I'm so proud of myself

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  3. Eyes that never meet,
    Fingers, lips that never touch:
    My inhibitions.

    Check out my entry today for more of the same, in sonnet form.

    http://jazzbumpa.blogspot.com/2010/11/haiku-wednesday-inhibition.html

    Cheers!
    JzB

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  4. I love the haikus!

    I've never really tried writing haikus before, but they can be a good way of expressing yourself.

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  5. Wow, this poetry is amazing!! I have so much trouble finding people who appreciate poetry. Keep up the great work! Nice blog :)

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  6. Your poem is beautiful and it is also educational.I appreciate the haikus too, short and sweet! Great!

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  7. Enjoyed your poetry. Loved the take on inhibitions.

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